wah tanu kya baat hai tum QUTAR ja ke bilkul hii change ho gayi...very good peom... keep writing... GOD BLESS
loved it jee ! beautiful!
thank u ji montoo bhaiya, vishu, motu :)loved reading ur comments...especially when its my first kavita :)@montoo bhaiya: ye qatar ka nahi, dhyan aur pyar ka kamaal hai ji :)
Aha.... started with poetry too :) A very cute one!Lots of Love,Netra
Oye Tussi great ho! Aur aap ki kavita aur bhi grrrreeaat hai!
:))) thanks so much ji suresh and netra@netra: i wonder, but this is my first ever poem :)
Tanu... well done!! what a lovely poem!! Keep writing!!
@Patricia: thanks so much :). your comment is highly valued :)
Tanu, You are wonderful!What a poem. Imagine a poem writing one, seeing one and living one.A poem serves its purpose if it merges you with your inner silence;Wish everyone and everything you see, touch, love and come across,be filled with magic, love, joy, beauty, enlightenment.
luv u papaji mummyji :)muaaaahhhhh!!!!!!
Thanks for your message :)