April 7, 2009

ek chhoti si kavita...


ek pyara sa ghar...
ek thandi si hawa...
ek ghantiyon ki gungunahat...
ek neela sa aasmaan...
ek adhoora sa chand, poore hone ki raah mein
ek chup si main, khud ko paane ki chah mein

11 comments:

  1. wah tanu kya baat hai tum QUTAR ja ke bilkul hii change ho gayi...very good peom... keep writing... GOD BLESS

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  2. loved it jee ! beautiful!

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  3. thank u ji montoo bhaiya, vishu, motu :)
    loved reading ur comments...especially when its my first kavita :)

    @montoo bhaiya: ye qatar ka nahi, dhyan aur pyar ka kamaal hai ji :)

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  4. Aha.... started with poetry too :)
    A very cute one!
    Lots of Love,
    Netra

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  5. Suresh6:54 AM

    Oye Tussi great ho! Aur aap ki kavita aur bhi grrrreeaat hai!

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  6. :))) thanks so much ji suresh and netra

    @netra: i wonder, but this is my first ever poem :)

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  7. Tanu... well done!! what a lovely poem!! Keep writing!!

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  8. @Patricia: thanks so much :). your comment is highly valued :)

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  9. Tanu, You are wonderful!
    What a poem.
    Imagine a poem writing one, seeing one and living one.
    A poem serves its purpose
    if it merges you
    with your inner silence;
    Wish everyone and everything you see, touch, love and come across,
    be filled with magic, love, joy, beauty, enlightenment.

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  10. luv u papaji mummyji :)
    muaaaahhhhh!!!!!!

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