ek pyara sa ghar... ek thandi si hawa... ek ghantiyon ki gungunahat... ek neela sa aasmaan... ek adhoora sa chand, poore hone ki raah mein ek chup si main, khud ko paane ki chah mein
Tanu, You are wonderful! What a poem. Imagine a poem writing one, seeing one and living one. A poem serves its purpose if it merges you with your inner silence; Wish everyone and everything you see, touch, love and come across, be filled with magic, love, joy, beauty, enlightenment.
wah tanu kya baat hai tum QUTAR ja ke bilkul hii change ho gayi...very good peom... keep writing... GOD BLESS
ReplyDeletebful dee
ReplyDeleteloved it jee ! beautiful!
ReplyDeletethank u ji montoo bhaiya, vishu, motu :)
ReplyDeleteloved reading ur comments...especially when its my first kavita :)
@montoo bhaiya: ye qatar ka nahi, dhyan aur pyar ka kamaal hai ji :)
Aha.... started with poetry too :)
ReplyDeleteA very cute one!
Lots of Love,
Netra
Oye Tussi great ho! Aur aap ki kavita aur bhi grrrreeaat hai!
ReplyDelete:))) thanks so much ji suresh and netra
ReplyDelete@netra: i wonder, but this is my first ever poem :)
Tanu... well done!! what a lovely poem!! Keep writing!!
ReplyDelete@Patricia: thanks so much :). your comment is highly valued :)
ReplyDeleteTanu, You are wonderful!
ReplyDeleteWhat a poem.
Imagine a poem writing one, seeing one and living one.
A poem serves its purpose
if it merges you
with your inner silence;
Wish everyone and everything you see, touch, love and come across,
be filled with magic, love, joy, beauty, enlightenment.
luv u papaji mummyji :)
ReplyDeletemuaaaahhhhh!!!!!!